Now with extra sauce!
Wow! This piece is pure genius. Love it!
I totally second these thoughts
A most excellent last couplet!! Perfectly phrased, ma'am.
Great!! A huge story in a tiny word count. Love this one. :)
HAhahaha! Oh, hang on - that's actually not funny, is it?!?!?! Loved it!
Nosed through some of your posts and this one just reached out and grabbed me. In the right place, of course. I carry concealed as well. Well, well done!
I welcome comments, but reserve the right to correct your spelling because I am OCD about it!