Friday, November 29, 2013

Therapy

mysteries abound

here are dark spots

shadows inside

ready for the light

put the words on paper

say them aloud

if they make sense

go back

erase a few

so that they don't


23 comments:

  1. I think this is quietly brilliant. Excellent 33 words, Tina!

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  2. Wouldn't want to make sense now, would we? I liked this.

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  3. So this is why I don't always understand a poem - lol, good summation of why many of us write. Take care kid.

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  4. I like this a lot! Subtle and clever. Nicely done!

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  5. I'm with Valerie! Lets kee them confused.

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  6. Simply beautiful and powerful. Excellent write!

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  7. Perfect response to the prompt.

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    1. They said free write. That's my specialty! Thank you for reading!

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  8. That's the way. You need that juxtaposition to make any sense of it. Great title, too. Nicely done!

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  9. Wonderful-specially loved the ending:-)

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  10. Ha! This is great. Love the ending.

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  11. You've got my vote. I love this. Like, really, really love this. Thanks for linking up. Don't forget to vote!! And if you haven't already, please email us your address if you'd like to participate in our ornament exchange!

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  12. Oh, those dark spots! Terrific title, too.

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  13. Gosh, you can pack a lot into 33 words!! FAAAAABULOUS!

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