Now with extra sauce!
Such a controlled piece, TIna! Love the threatening tone - the one-word cascade - mixed with vulnerability at the end. Excellent title, too!
I love how this starts all romantic like a fairy tale then quickly escalates into betrayal. Brilliant. The wrong door..and definitely the wrong choice. ♥
Loved the way you expressed a lot in just few words.
The way you structured this was really fantastic. And I love how you answered the question. Wonderful job!
Live this one. So writerly!
I liked a lot of this, especially the emotional components. I am confused by the use of "Than" when I expected "Then," but somehow, it works. Found you on Yeah, Writes. Looking forward to more.Best to you,Sally
You're getting REALLY good now, girlfriend!
I welcome comments, but reserve the right to correct your spelling because I am OCD about it!