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Thats a piece of the human heart! How we all wish to go back and start again, how we all know that will never be possible. I like your take very much :)
It's because your heart is larger than your feet.I like how you played off the prompt, T.
So true... Nicely written!
These are the lines that got me: "The days will pass/Whether I will it/Or not;" I love your title!
Yup, gotta keep on keepin on. Love your attitude, Tina!
"My feet march,Forever treadingUnknown paths."I love that. Such a strong opening!
For some reason, I found this sadder than maybe I should have, yet also doggedly hopeful. That's a pretty complex collection of emotions for 42 words!
Indeed, we can only go forward from where we are. The title is really really good!
This really strikes a chord with me. I love the last line.
The haunting tragedy of the past that can never be re-lived. Love the mood here!
yes, I think we all wish for fresh starts in life!
Yep. I'm kinda there right now... Definitely resonates for me, TMW.
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