Now with extra sauce!
This is good, too good! The last bit... Lovely take.
You had me at hello, too, T. Great work.
Oh. Yes, I met him once too. That moment is hard to forget. 😊Happy Monday my friend.
Smartly and confidently done...great rhythm and perfect ending.
The ending is really great. I love the line "A single word laid me low."
Oh, this is good. Nice job!
Love the Hello laying her low!
Wonderfully done. I could feel the word worming its way. And such an innocent little word at that.
He had her at hello. Priceless!
'what was left of me collapsed' *swoon* Rocking 'em, Tina!
I liked how you led up to the collapse and ended on Hello
ooh.. this was a good one. it really brings you deep into the imagination, especially with the title and where the story goes... great plot development in such a few sentences. props!
Oooh, it is as simple and incredibly complex as that!
oh very unique!
As Andrea commented above -- it's as simple and complex as that. Nicely done.
So cleverly done. A great piece of writing.
Oh - those last two lines really clinched it. Great, great emotional little piece. Thanks so much for linking it up!
You had me at the cédille in façade.
Some facades crack easily.. if we just knew...
Your choice of rhyming at the end really drove the idea home. Lots of skill here!
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