tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post1541684074996451278..comments2024-03-19T02:18:16.398-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: The Camera LiesTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-84264287091774097882014-06-10T16:54:08.329-05:002014-06-10T16:54:08.329-05:00Your choice of rhyming at the end really drove the...Your choice of rhyming at the end really drove the idea home. Lots of skill here!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-45754078370153719402014-06-10T13:24:27.157-05:002014-06-10T13:24:27.157-05:00Some facades crack easily.. if we just knew... Some facades crack easily.. if we just knew... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-34346676809489677602014-06-10T12:12:42.748-05:002014-06-10T12:12:42.748-05:00You had me at the cédille in façade. You had me at the cédille in façade. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-17625680615849421692014-06-10T11:40:27.198-05:002014-06-10T11:40:27.198-05:00Oh - those last two lines really clinched it. Grea...Oh - those last two lines really clinched it. Great, great emotional little piece. Thanks so much for linking it up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-36776969165099960042014-06-10T02:37:58.787-05:002014-06-10T02:37:58.787-05:00So cleverly done. A great piece of writing.So cleverly done. A great piece of writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-51625217876240304722014-06-09T22:16:47.215-05:002014-06-09T22:16:47.215-05:00As Andrea commented above -- it's as simple an...As Andrea commented above -- it's as simple and complex as that. Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-71012563481728276122014-06-09T20:05:41.847-05:002014-06-09T20:05:41.847-05:00oh very unique! oh very unique! Jen Brunetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05394884068337771724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-13531673278353369772014-06-09T18:59:58.404-05:002014-06-09T18:59:58.404-05:00Oooh, it is as simple and incredibly complex as th...Oooh, it is as simple and incredibly complex as that!Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01294308714313220666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-92116343571774322492014-06-09T18:18:05.592-05:002014-06-09T18:18:05.592-05:00ooh.. this was a good one. it really brings you de...ooh.. this was a good one. it really brings you deep into the imagination, especially with the title and where the story goes... great plot development in such a few sentences. props! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-17558486741996816692014-06-09T18:06:02.460-05:002014-06-09T18:06:02.460-05:00I liked how you led up to the collapse and ended o...I liked how you led up to the collapse and ended on HelloMarcyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18146625702822086807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-13889882701883112102014-06-09T17:47:08.533-05:002014-06-09T17:47:08.533-05:00'what was left of me collapsed' *swoon* Ro...'what was left of me collapsed' *swoon* Rocking 'em, Tina!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-76166773396589254562014-06-09T15:50:05.184-05:002014-06-09T15:50:05.184-05:00He had her at hello. Priceless!He had her at hello. Priceless!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-53503454262462416592014-06-09T15:46:41.761-05:002014-06-09T15:46:41.761-05:00Wonderfully done. I could feel the word worming it...Wonderfully done. I could feel the word worming its way. And such an innocent little word at that. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-84618261661382500162014-06-09T13:55:08.233-05:002014-06-09T13:55:08.233-05:00Love the Hello laying her low!Love the Hello laying her low!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-27890674724267048592014-06-09T13:00:50.935-05:002014-06-09T13:00:50.935-05:00Oh, this is good. Nice job!Oh, this is good. Nice job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-33009940356159498592014-06-09T09:54:44.258-05:002014-06-09T09:54:44.258-05:00The ending is really great. I love the line "...The ending is really great. I love the line "A single word laid me low."psychochefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12863106240537001318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-87116045402710692452014-06-09T09:13:07.189-05:002014-06-09T09:13:07.189-05:00Smartly and confidently done...great rhythm and pe...Smartly and confidently done...great rhythm and perfect ending.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13151381250841886227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-19366133004903717502014-06-09T09:12:49.828-05:002014-06-09T09:12:49.828-05:00Oh. Yes, I met him once too.
That moment is hard...Oh. Yes, I met him once too. <br /><br />That moment is hard to forget. 😊<br /><br />Happy Monday my friend. Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-20522793073345139282014-06-09T08:52:00.118-05:002014-06-09T08:52:00.118-05:00You had me at hello, too, T. Great work.You had me at hello, too, T. Great work.Lancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02421199592104616785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-44581228245789485362014-06-09T07:11:35.296-05:002014-06-09T07:11:35.296-05:00This is good, too good! The last bit... Lovely tak...This is good, too good! The last bit... Lovely take.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com