Friday, November 29, 2013

Therapy

mysteries abound

here are dark spots

shadows inside

ready for the light

put the words on paper

say them aloud

if they make sense

go back

erase a few

so that they don't


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23 comments:

  1. Valerie BoersmaNovember 29, 2013 at 1:37 PM

    I think this is quietly brilliant. Excellent 33 words, Tina!

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  2. tedstrutzNovember 29, 2013 at 4:05 PM

    Wouldn't want to make sense now, would we? I liked this.

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  3. Ann BennettNovember 29, 2013 at 6:10 PM

    So this is why I don't always understand a poem - lol, good summation of why many of us write. Take care kid.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 29, 2013 at 7:08 PM

    I like this a lot! Subtle and clever. Nicely done!

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  5. GinaNovember 29, 2013 at 7:33 PM

    I'm with Valerie! Lets kee them confused.

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  6. UnknownNovember 29, 2013 at 10:29 PM

    Really nice piece here

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  7. AnonymousNovember 30, 2013 at 1:24 AM

    Simply beautiful and powerful. Excellent write!

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  8. Tara R.November 30, 2013 at 8:36 AM

    Perfect response to the prompt.

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    1. TMWHickmanNovember 30, 2013 at 9:51 AM

      They said free write. That's my specialty! Thank you for reading!

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  9. DraugNovember 30, 2013 at 12:42 PM

    Great work!

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  10. AnonymousNovember 30, 2013 at 2:53 PM

    That's the way. You need that juxtaposition to make any sense of it. Great title, too. Nicely done!

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  11. AtreyeeDecember 1, 2013 at 1:55 PM

    Wonderful-specially loved the ending:-)

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  12. IvyDecember 1, 2013 at 5:17 PM

    Ha! This is great. Love the ending.

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  13. TrifectaDecember 1, 2013 at 7:55 PM

    You've got my vote. I love this. Like, really, really love this. Thanks for linking up. Don't forget to vote!! And if you haven't already, please email us your address if you'd like to participate in our ornament exchange!

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  14. glynis rankinDecember 1, 2013 at 10:35 PM

    Nicely done

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  15. kymmDecember 2, 2013 at 4:05 AM

    Oh, those dark spots! Terrific title, too.

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  16. Red Nomad OZDecember 4, 2013 at 11:14 PM

    Gosh, you can pack a lot into 33 words!! FAAAAABULOUS!

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