Now with extra sauce!
I think this is quietly brilliant. Excellent 33 words, Tina!
Thank you very much!
Wouldn't want to make sense now, would we? I liked this.
Thank you for reading.
So this is why I don't always understand a poem - lol, good summation of why many of us write. Take care kid.
You too! Thank you for reading.
I like this a lot! Subtle and clever. Nicely done!
I'm with Valerie! Lets kee them confused.
I'll try to do just that!
Really nice piece here
Simply beautiful and powerful. Excellent write!
Perfect response to the prompt.
They said free write. That's my specialty! Thank you for reading!
That's the way. You need that juxtaposition to make any sense of it. Great title, too. Nicely done!
I love this.
Wonderful-specially loved the ending:-)
Ha! This is great. Love the ending.
You've got my vote. I love this. Like, really, really love this. Thanks for linking up. Don't forget to vote!! And if you haven't already, please email us your address if you'd like to participate in our ornament exchange!
Oh, those dark spots! Terrific title, too.
Gosh, you can pack a lot into 33 words!! FAAAAABULOUS!
I welcome comments, but reserve the right to correct your spelling because I am OCD about it!