Saturday, November 16, 2013

Daydreams


Whenever
I close my eyes 
your hand 
gliding slowly
my naked thigh
tingles and shivers
mouths fused
while
rough fingertips
counterbalance  
the softness of your lips
as you trace the outline of
Me and fill it
with You
Naked
hips
surging against mine
rolling
the swell of
Us





TrifeXXXtra:  In honor of National Erotica Day, write 33 to 333 words of erotica.  I was going to title this 'Daydreams about Night Things' until I realized that that was the name of a Ronnie Milsap song.  
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18 comments:

  1. Valerie BoersmaNovember 16, 2013 at 11:15 AM

    Steamy, and gorgeous, and I loved every single word of this incredibly "slow-burn" sensual piece of writing! Well done!

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  2. UnawareButUnderlinedNovember 16, 2013 at 12:09 PM

    Oh I love...

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  3. glynis rankinNovember 16, 2013 at 1:39 PM

    I love this especially the line
    "as you trace the outline of
    Me and fill it
    with You"
    Simply beautiful!

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  4. AnonymousNovember 16, 2013 at 10:02 PM

    Mmm, this is delightfully steamy and beautiful!

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  5. DraugNovember 16, 2013 at 10:41 PM

    This is lovely, sexy work.

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  6. UnknownNovember 17, 2013 at 5:29 AM

    Oh this was very good - rhythm and pacing drawing me in, and such a steamy scene

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  7. Ann BennettNovember 17, 2013 at 7:41 AM

    Very sensual and real. Good job.

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  8. GinaNovember 17, 2013 at 9:37 AM

    The pacing of this is perfect! Sexy, romantic! Come visit me at anonymous (my college kids just wouldn't "get" mom's entry).

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  9. brudbergNovember 17, 2013 at 12:47 PM

    Wonderfully sexy...

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  10. kymmNovember 17, 2013 at 5:56 PM

    The swell of us
    Love that. Hot, hot, hot.

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  11. TMWHickmanNovember 17, 2013 at 6:44 PM

    Thank you!

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  12. IvyNovember 17, 2013 at 8:44 PM

    Ooh! Beautiful and sexy.

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  13. AtreyeeNovember 18, 2013 at 5:18 AM

    Sensuous!!

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