Saturday, November 16, 2013

Daydreams


Whenever
I close my eyes 
your hand 
gliding slowly
my naked thigh
tingles and shivers
mouths fused
while
rough fingertips
counterbalance  
the softness of your lips
as you trace the outline of
Me and fill it
with You
Naked
hips
surging against mine
rolling
the swell of
Us





TrifeXXXtra:  In honor of National Erotica Day, write 33 to 333 words of erotica.  I was going to title this 'Daydreams about Night Things' until I realized that that was the name of a Ronnie Milsap song.  

22 comments:

  1. Steamy, and gorgeous, and I loved every single word of this incredibly "slow-burn" sensual piece of writing! Well done!

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  2. I love this especially the line
    "as you trace the outline of
    Me and fill it
    with You"
    Simply beautiful!

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  3. Mmm, this is delightfully steamy and beautiful!

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  4. Oh this was very good - rhythm and pacing drawing me in, and such a steamy scene

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  5. The pacing of this is perfect! Sexy, romantic! Come visit me at anonymous (my college kids just wouldn't "get" mom's entry).

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  6. The swell of us
    Love that. Hot, hot, hot.

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