into the dreaming each night.
We escape our onerous tether,
and,
Responsibilities forgotten,
We put on our crown
And rule
The only world that is
Ours to command.
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This weekend we're asking for 30 of your own words plus the three following words for a total of 33 words.
Tether Loft Crown
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We put on our crown and rule. Lovely lines
ReplyDeleteSplendid
ReplyDeleteOh how true! I love blissful dreaming. I hate when my "real" life invades. This is wonderful! And beautiful!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous! Love this!
ReplyDeleteWell done!! "onerous tether": that's perfect. Enjoyed this :))
ReplyDeleteI like especially how you use 'loft.'
ReplyDeleteGreat work with the prompt words.
ReplyDeleteThe right dreams really can be an escape. (I say the right dreams, because the ones I remember, are riddled with anxiety from something bothering me from my waking hours.) This does make wonder if my kids would listen to me better if I had a crown? Mmmm...only in my dreams!
ReplyDeleteNice images and great use of the prompt words.
ReplyDeleteOh, I really like the subtle fantasy of this. Dreams are a great escape. If I could truly command my dreams, a lot more of them would feature Robert Downey, Jr., and Ben Affleck. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful work!
Ah anyone can rule a world small enough...
ReplyDeleteSo true!Now only if we could dream as we want :-)
ReplyDeleteOh, this was lovely.
ReplyDeleteOhh, this is lovely, and so true. I love those first two lines - a great way to open this poem, and so beautifully written. Great job.
ReplyDeleteamazing imagery. I almost wish you hadn't bolded the words. They seem to flow in with the rest. well done
ReplyDeleteOh how I wish these were the kind of dreams I was escaping to lately! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI agree 100% with everything Lance said. There was a beautiful flow to this piece. I love how you used 'loft'. Thanks for linking up. Remember to vote!
ReplyDeleteSuddenly I wish I remembered dreams more often (tho mine are usually just teeth-grinding continuations of the day...)
ReplyDeleteTerrific piece, Tina!