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Oh wow, that last line. I shivered. Great take on the prompt.
This is fabulous. Great take on the prompt and such a powerful punch in 42 words.
This is an absolutely amazing story and piece of writing, Tina! Clever and sad and disgusting and...
Wow! Loved it.
This was so evocative!*Shailaja's Gargleblaster*
Very cool, Gina. And that 'godforsaken' is so well placed! touché. Weighing the daughter. jeeeez.
Whoah. Intense! Agree on the last line. Even though you already know what's happening at that point, it still has a punch to it.
Oh, man - such a downhill slide in so short a story. Wonderful, wonderful job.
Brilliant. Searing, heartbreaking and unfortunately probably not far off, but brilliant. That last line. Wow.
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