Now with extra sauce!
Oh, you always bring the emotion. I could feel my stomach drop with that last line. Well done, my friend.
I felt a bomb drop on that one. Love it!
What Kir said!!
Wow. Disintegrating soul. Going for broke, Tina!
How dreadful to have that image of someone you admire be dashed to pieces. Yet, how effortlessly you have conveyed that in 42 words! Beautiful!
What a stark and powerful scene!
Maddening. I love the emotion you created!
I'm left wondering if it was fair of her to tell. She has shattered a life and left. Such powerful emotions you evoke with this.
Oooh I liked it! It was like watching the ending to as great movie. Great job.
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