Tuesday, July 22, 2014

Self Awareness

Breathe in.

Wonderous frequencies
Gather
Vibrating on the membrane
Inside.

Breathe out.

My heart beats
A familiar patter
Comforting.

Breathe in.

Even the rumble
Of my empty belly
Becomes entwined.

Breathe out.

The constancy
Of the melody
Allows my thoughts
To soar.




13 comments:

  1. "The constancy
    Of the melody
    Allow my thoughts
    To soar."
    Stellar!

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  2. The constancy
    Of the melody
    Allow my thoughts
    To soar."

    My thoughts soared, too. So beautiful!

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  3. I found myself breathing as directed. :) It was a nice addition to the reading. Also loved:
    My heart beats
    A familiar patter
    Comforting.

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  4. "Vibrating on the membrane" ..that is so lovely and telling, it made my own fingers tingle.
    I just loved this.

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  5. Wow...so relaxing...I might need to print this out and hang it on the wall where I see it...often!!

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  6. I breathed through the stanzas...a new physical experience with a poem for me! Those "breathe in breathe out" lines work so well.

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  7. "Breathe in.
    Wonderous frequencies
    Gather"
    A beautiful opening, which pretty much sums up the simple wonder of being alive.

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  8. Lovely. I like how you structured this with the breathing in and out. I agree with the comments that this is relaxing. It caused me to show down and take a few deep breaths.

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  9. This poem felt like someone was teaching me to meditate—a frequency that's harder to be receptive to than a radio or tv. Love this answer to the prompt!

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  10. Wonderful take on the prompt. I could feel myself relaxing as I read it.

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  11. Quiet & contemplative. I like the way you integrated the prompt -- much to the opposite of its origin.

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