Saturday, May 18, 2013

Revolution

It's time.

Time to

Step off this loop

We've called our lives.

Let's

Pour honey on the gears,

Shift this paradigm

Off the axis, and

Topple the old gods

Who've led us astray.





On to the weekend prompt.  This weekend we are asking for exactly 33 words, 30 of your own and three of the following:

topple     paradigm     underneath     nerve     honey     loop

I used four, sorry.

16 comments:

  1. Don't be sorry, your leading the revolt, use all the words if you want to...I am right there with you!
    Katie atBankerchick Scratchings

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    1. I thought about using them all, but I didn't want to be too revolutionary!

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  2. Revolutions can be fun, but they can backfire too. Better be careful!

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    1. Revolutionaries, by their nature, are not known for caution, but I will try.

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  3. I love feeling that impulse, thanks for capturing it so well

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  4. fist in the air, flowers in the hair, which side do I take? :) Great job!

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  5. It only happens a few times in your life but this sums it up well.

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  6. Amen to that! Count me in.

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    1. That is what I like about you--always willing to join the party!

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  7. Sounds like some people are ready for Catching Fire!

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  8. This is the battle cry! I like the pouring honey on the gears...that's gonna be a mess when it dries :)

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    1. Of course. Revolutions do tend to be messy!

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  9. Wonderful piece and I loved the last two lines-yes,do let's topple the Gods who led us
    astray:-)

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  10. Change is the only thing that stays the same. I like it!

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  11. Things can only get messy what with honey and revolutions. Great piece.

    Thanks for linking up!

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