Saturday, April 20, 2013

Remy Speaks

Remy speaks of Teddy,
Their glorious charge up San Juan Hill.
That battle lost a century ago.

Teddy is long dead.
It sounds so real,

yet

Remy sees all
on the perpetual TV
In his head.



This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 of your own words plus the following three words:
  • charge
  • century
  • lost
So 33 of yours plus 3 of ours means that everyone will have a 36 word response this time around.


15 comments:

  1. I swear I am trying this one of these days! Love seeing your creativity every week!

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    1. You totally should! It is so much fun, and you would be great!

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  2. My grandfather was in that battle. his version was a little different than the history books.

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  3. Nice use of the prompt words!

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  4. we tried something similar. The stories in our heads are more entertaining. well done, Tina.

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  5. Perpetual TV sounds awesome. Great job!

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  6. I'm sure he wishes he can change the channel sometimes. Good work with the prompt words.

    Thanks for linking up!

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  7. Nicely done! Those 33 words go so fast, don't they?

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  8. I like this one. That tv in his head. Well put! :)

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  9. How much more entertaining must Remy's TV be!!

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  11. The individual perspective, and the 'perpetual TV in his head' made this a very touching piece.

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  12. I'm seeing a movie loop repeating going on and on! You are so incredibly creative, Tina!

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  13. It's certainly compelling, memory as TV loop. Poor Remy though. Great post.

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