Saturday, February 2, 2013

Why I Have So Many Headaches



Prompt:  For the weekend prompt we're asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.
Good luck and have a great weekend!  


"Do you have the money or not?"

"It's in the envelope."

"Hey! This is only half of what you owe me."

"You didn't kill him. You get the other half when you do."

32 comments:

  1. This made me laugh. I'm not sure why because it was about murder and all. Maybe that should tell you what kind of mood I'm in today.

    I really did enjoy this one.

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  2. You have headaches because your hit men/women demand 100% payment up front? I guess it's a common problem. Interesting and real dialogue!

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  3. Well,he/she has half the money without getting blood on his/her hands-so why bother?lol!Great plot & in 33 words through cool dialogue-awesome!:-)

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  4. I love the casualness behind this conversation.

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    1. My thought is that people who are willing to go this far would be very casual about it.

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  5. The title just adds to the dialoge--great

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  6. Well, geez, I think our minds work along the same lines. Well done.

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  7. Hahaha - this is great! (Please tell me this is fiction and not borrowed from personal experience :grin:)

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  8. Duh, creepy assassin. Don't you know how these things work? (:

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  9. They are lucky they are getting half!

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  10. and how do I know that you won't just kill ME and take back the first half? Hmmmmm?????

    :)

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  11. I'm not sure it works well with that sort, shorting them up front. Gutsy move, and nice dialogue. :-)

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  12. Great take on the prompt! A good freelancer should know they only get the full fee when they deliver their full services! ;)

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  13. So much death this weekend! I kinda love it.

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