Now with extra sauce!
This made me laugh. I'm not sure why because it was about murder and all. Maybe that should tell you what kind of mood I'm in today. I really did enjoy this one.
I am so glad you enjoyed it!
You have headaches because your hit men/women demand 100% payment up front? I guess it's a common problem. Interesting and real dialogue!
So hard to find good help these days!
Well,he/she has half the money without getting blood on his/her hands-so why bother?lol!Great plot & in 33 words through cool dialogue-awesome!:-)
I love the casualness behind this conversation.
My thought is that people who are willing to go this far would be very casual about it.
The title just adds to the dialoge--great
Well, geez, I think our minds work along the same lines. Well done.
Ooh, I love it!!
Hahaha - this is great! (Please tell me this is fiction and not borrowed from personal experience :grin:)
Shhhh! It's a secret!
Duh, creepy assassin. Don't you know how these things work? (:
I hate it when assassins get uppity!
oooh snap. :)
They are lucky they are getting half!
and how do I know that you won't just kill ME and take back the first half? Hmmmmm?????:)
I'm not sure it works well with that sort, shorting them up front. Gutsy move, and nice dialogue. :-)
Haha! Thank you!
Great take on the prompt! A good freelancer should know they only get the full fee when they deliver their full services! ;)
So much death this weekend! I kinda love it.
I know! It's been great!
Nice! I would watch this movie. :)
Oh I smell mafia!
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