tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post8375224438261993311..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: Promises Are MadeTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-59579094686014144442013-03-21T21:27:38.525-05:002013-03-21T21:27:38.525-05:00Good for Curtis. Good for Curtis. Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-45432005642061548122013-03-21T19:59:03.516-05:002013-03-21T19:59:03.516-05:00I love this story. What great writing. I love this story. What great writing. lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-85901327439315055202013-03-21T19:46:58.166-05:002013-03-21T19:46:58.166-05:00Oh, that old devil temptation! And those legs!Oh, that old devil temptation! And those legs!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-54755207098707489182013-03-21T16:57:27.705-05:002013-03-21T16:57:27.705-05:00I love the ending! Just hope mother doesn't c...I love the ending! Just hope mother doesn't come back you haunt him. Good job!Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-10521681598354772602013-03-21T15:29:33.984-05:002013-03-21T15:29:33.984-05:00Aww,such a surprisingly sweet end,holding out a lo...Aww,such a surprisingly sweet end,holding out a lot of promises for an interesting future,am sure;-)Loved it:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-90731660658188918822013-03-21T08:42:09.502-05:002013-03-21T08:42:09.502-05:00Beautifully done! The last line is so flip, yet is...Beautifully done! The last line is so flip, yet isn't that how some decisions fall away in just an instant? (And of course his mother would forgive him... don't mothers always?)angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-53056276662987617472013-03-21T08:39:57.737-05:002013-03-21T08:39:57.737-05:00Great stuff! Thank goodness Curtis saw the light o...Great stuff! Thank goodness Curtis saw the light or rather the women's legs before he commited himself to a life of celibacy.MommyHeadachehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03924035710478459520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-73185941491688762372013-03-21T05:01:59.889-05:002013-03-21T05:01:59.889-05:00Nicely done; some torment ahead for him, I think.Nicely done; some torment ahead for him, I think.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-51843895184832700632013-03-21T00:06:11.950-05:002013-03-21T00:06:11.950-05:00Ha! That last line is great (: I'm glad he'...Ha! That last line is great (: I'm glad he's not going to devote his whole life to his mother even after her death. Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-31046824942883960082013-03-20T20:26:52.448-05:002013-03-20T20:26:52.448-05:00This is a great one!This is a great one!Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01294308714313220666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-85043072636073434222013-03-20T15:17:29.755-05:002013-03-20T15:17:29.755-05:00LOVE. This is definitely my favorite thus far. Y...LOVE. This is definitely my favorite thus far. Your last paragraph was flawless, absolutely divine. Thank you for sharing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01628986566011233882noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-5968483803635075142013-03-20T13:18:19.020-05:002013-03-20T13:18:19.020-05:00wonderful final line :)wonderful final line :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-5108887188769422172013-03-20T11:42:51.915-05:002013-03-20T11:42:51.915-05:00You definitely have my vote. :)You definitely have my vote. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-86315178902658835242013-03-20T11:39:13.219-05:002013-03-20T11:39:13.219-05:00This is great. Excellent. Well done. I really enjo...This is great. Excellent. Well done. I really enjoyed this story here. My favorite so far. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-27932311638636416562013-03-20T10:02:52.986-05:002013-03-20T10:02:52.986-05:00Lovely story - poignant and compelling - and a gre...Lovely story - poignant and compelling - and a great use of the prompts.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-85962236776970984912013-03-20T08:58:29.795-05:002013-03-20T08:58:29.795-05:00Seamless use of the prompts!
I loved the irony o...Seamless use of the prompts! <br /><br />I loved the irony of being in the holiest of places only to be led to distraction. I did wonder if the last line could have ended with just: His mother would never forgive him. Only because you see his mother demanding that promise in the beginning.<br /><br />Great read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com