tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post7062047174286853109..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: Microfiction: Dead Man WalkingTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-27824771382996728902014-09-20T15:00:02.489-05:002014-09-20T15:00:02.489-05:00I was surprised by the last line, and my heart sur...I was surprised by the last line, and my heart surged at the chance for revenge. He certainly deserves whatever she'll bring. I know you didn't mention the he/she, but that's how I pictured it.Marcyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18146625702822086807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-11614793156536772482014-09-18T15:53:31.844-05:002014-09-18T15:53:31.844-05:00Love it - there's great strength in your voice...Love it - there's great strength in your voice here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-29081844266615218392014-09-18T14:14:15.918-05:002014-09-18T14:14:15.918-05:00This is very relevant considering the NFL scandals...This is very relevant considering the NFL scandals going on! And, I hope it's obvious, I love a story about an abuse victim serving as her own champion! Great job with the imagery! -MelanieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-77959784576550172382014-09-18T10:50:06.309-05:002014-09-18T10:50:06.309-05:00SO GOOD!
That last line has me all tingly.
You ma...SO GOOD!<br />That last line has me all tingly. <br />You made me want to show up with a bat and help...not that she needed it. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-35109245079420831692014-09-18T09:29:32.167-05:002014-09-18T09:29:32.167-05:00So much power in her tone. No weakness. No pity. N...So much power in her tone. No weakness. No pity. No shame. Nice work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-80727114772452064522014-09-18T09:27:13.539-05:002014-09-18T09:27:13.539-05:00oh man.. I'd like to see what happens once the...oh man.. I'd like to see what happens once they're sleeping!Jen Brunetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05394884068337771724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-29950204357181035162014-09-18T08:53:42.756-05:002014-09-18T08:53:42.756-05:00mahahaha LOVE this evil vibe :)mahahaha LOVE this evil vibe :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-68883116670414929092014-09-17T18:36:15.676-05:002014-09-17T18:36:15.676-05:00I love how you had her defeated, only to rise up a...I love how you had her defeated, only to rise up at the end with her chilling pronouncement! Whoa.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-58470090758605634712014-09-17T14:19:45.097-05:002014-09-17T14:19:45.097-05:00You always deliver a great zinger, Tina! I used to...You always deliver a great zinger, Tina! I used to say, if anyone ever did that to me, that I would have a bat at the ready for when they went to sleep. So yeah, I relate to this in that way. Go get him, I say!!!Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-33873599851243391312014-09-17T12:02:21.080-05:002014-09-17T12:02:21.080-05:00I like the purposeful intent of the last line rein...I like the purposeful intent of the last line reinforces the title. Great use of the prompt! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-58521085150190668572014-09-17T11:57:03.810-05:002014-09-17T11:57:03.810-05:00Great last line. As always, your words are perfect...Great last line. As always, your words are perfect.. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-46715850533955558332014-09-17T10:41:43.128-05:002014-09-17T10:41:43.128-05:00You convey the thoughts and emotions beautifully. ...You convey the thoughts and emotions beautifully. Wonderful last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-10679299227052754602014-09-17T08:08:56.799-05:002014-09-17T08:08:56.799-05:00I suspect she may do more than escape. Perfectly w...I suspect she may do more than escape. Perfectly written.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09526646692173867711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-71144058298556692972014-09-17T06:53:30.783-05:002014-09-17T06:53:30.783-05:00That image. That image of her lying there, broken,...That image. That image of her lying there, broken, battered, but filled with strength, that is one powerful image. Wonderful response!Shailaja Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12639542621638996802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-29664881581759638312014-09-17T06:46:28.519-05:002014-09-17T06:46:28.519-05:00I've known several people who were in abusive ...I've known several people who were in abusive relationships. I've personally been in a few verbally abusive relationships but never a physically abusive one. One of the last boyfriends I had before meeting my current husband started becoming physically threatening although he never actually hit me. I'm a big woman, but I was quite frightened. I was afraid he might kill me.<br />http://openmindedsearchfortruth.blogspot.com/2014/09/gargleblaster-demiurge-responds-to.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04340502635488404564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-50661305210532761882014-09-16T06:56:51.765-05:002014-09-16T06:56:51.765-05:00Chilling, but like Kir I want to cheer... Chilling, but like Kir I want to cheer... Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-62611993247257201352014-09-15T11:14:41.474-05:002014-09-15T11:14:41.474-05:00I am having #allthefeelings reading this, like I w...I am having #allthefeelings reading this, like I want to clap and wave and hug you. Tight. <br />I love the idea of treating him "the it" like a villain to defeat. <br /><br />That last line was perfect. Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.com