tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post6807017980544904471..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: InexplicableTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-49954673973667678332013-04-14T11:11:13.987-05:002013-04-14T11:11:13.987-05:00The what if walks by.
If I had a penny for every ...The what if walks by.<br /><br />If I had a penny for every time my fanciful young self spun out a fantasy like this about a stranger on a train... Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-57452366116827804102013-04-12T07:57:23.931-05:002013-04-12T07:57:23.931-05:00This is beautifully written. The "what-if&quo...This is beautifully written. The "what-if" walking by was my favourite part of the poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-73750848855837248512013-04-12T04:02:23.056-05:002013-04-12T04:02:23.056-05:00Love the air becoming sand.
Remembering a train r...Love the air becoming sand.<br /><br />Remembering a train ride back from getting my eye taped up, small kid climbing all over me, and catching the eye (my good one) of a drop-dead gorgeous, younger guy sitting across from us. He smiled. *sigh* God he was cute.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-5817951284481039152013-04-11T16:36:31.549-05:002013-04-11T16:36:31.549-05:00Not mediocre! The last line is kind of haunting, l...Not mediocre! The last line is kind of haunting, like we miss so much. We blink.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-39659977726801919612013-04-11T10:51:46.064-05:002013-04-11T10:51:46.064-05:00I never feel qualified to comment on poetry becaus...I never feel qualified to comment on poetry because I don't really understand it, but I can say that I really like this and especially this line: <br /><br />And the air<br /><br />becomes sand in<br /><br />timeless alchemy.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-55304141579727693182013-04-11T10:49:27.026-05:002013-04-11T10:49:27.026-05:00Ohhh- what a moment. Sounds like a fun bus stop fa...Ohhh- what a moment. Sounds like a fun bus stop fantasy :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-15107254352521572432013-04-10T22:39:31.699-05:002013-04-10T22:39:31.699-05:00It's always fun to imagine how chance meetings...It's always fun to imagine how chance meetings could turn out. Awesome interpretation of the prompt!Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-76597522727988689542013-04-10T19:54:52.062-05:002013-04-10T19:54:52.062-05:00Well. I have to feel better, just so I can cook so...Well. I have to feel better, just so I can cook something and look sexy!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-5413397369888245332013-04-10T18:16:54.940-05:002013-04-10T18:16:54.940-05:00I like it a lot, completely sober. With a drink I&...I like it a lot, completely sober. With a drink I'd climb on the roof and recite it to the first stranger who walked by. Cheers! :)Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117409443842865395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-14630042397171531212013-04-10T18:16:14.713-05:002013-04-10T18:16:14.713-05:00Oooh, I like it. I have a song I wrote (yes, anoth...Oooh, I like it. I have a song I wrote (yes, another one...yikes) that has a simlar theme. By the way, the Blogher pop up ad for me on your blog just now was "how to be sexier when you cook"....wait I have to feed people AND be sexy when I do it?!?!?! Feel better friend!Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01294308714313220666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-35303394669243493172013-04-10T11:57:15.812-05:002013-04-10T11:57:15.812-05:00Beautifully captured "blink" of a though...Beautifully captured "blink" of a thought.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-50261643091131778902013-04-10T10:20:27.762-05:002013-04-10T10:20:27.762-05:00I loved this! We all have those what if moments.....I loved this! We all have those what if moments...the ones that would change the course of our lives, if only... <br /><br />Sorry to hear about your migraine too. I know from experience that they are not fun!Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-31730736464747242472013-04-10T08:41:51.884-05:002013-04-10T08:41:51.884-05:00Great poem - and such a familiar moment, a blink o...Great poem - and such a familiar moment, a blink of the mind and another world moves in and takes root. Sometimes for years.<br /><br />Thanks for this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-41440814568962255572013-04-10T08:12:06.874-05:002013-04-10T08:12:06.874-05:00Sorry for your migraine - but look what transpired...Sorry for your migraine - but look what transpired :-) Hope you are felling better.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10020430647050532416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-69668562787571306742013-04-10T07:48:08.859-05:002013-04-10T07:48:08.859-05:00I am a sucker for a good looking smile!I am a sucker for a good looking smile!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-19029694951531389472013-04-10T05:45:12.921-05:002013-04-10T05:45:12.921-05:00I think we all have these what if moments in our l...I think we all have these what if moments in our lifetime. Anonymous daydreams.katie eggemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00615362861509258088noreply@blogger.com