tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post6782958902832984486..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: Breaking FreeTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-90605932365303425432014-02-01T17:15:34.562-06:002014-02-01T17:15:34.562-06:00I pay attention to that moment as well. It makes ...I pay attention to that moment as well. It makes walking in the woods a more profound experience, I think. Thank you for reading!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-40005695270604525422014-02-01T17:14:51.189-06:002014-02-01T17:14:51.189-06:00Thank you!Thank you!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-36455377719022835022014-02-01T17:14:38.994-06:002014-02-01T17:14:38.994-06:00Thank you for commenting--I really appreciate it!Thank you for commenting--I really appreciate it!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-23850184180088084972014-02-01T17:14:08.017-06:002014-02-01T17:14:08.017-06:00Thank you so much for reading!Thank you so much for reading!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-23763267327113376522014-02-01T17:13:53.149-06:002014-02-01T17:13:53.149-06:00Thank you...now get some sleep!Thank you...now get some sleep!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-60514119171452624672014-02-01T17:06:34.633-06:002014-02-01T17:06:34.633-06:00Thank you for stopping by!Thank you for stopping by!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-35925870501381932072014-01-31T22:36:13.503-06:002014-01-31T22:36:13.503-06:00"her body worn away"
That was my favor..."her body worn away" <br /><br />That was my favorite part, a respite for her after the repetition of her searching, walking feet.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-69988997126767913442014-01-31T13:41:20.569-06:002014-01-31T13:41:20.569-06:00The repetition of "she walked" is very p...The repetition of "she walked" is very poetic. I also loved the first paragraph; it reminded me of hiking in the mountains and how I would pay attention to that moment when the sounds of the cars driving by would just disappear and I felt enveloped in the wilderness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-72692818935835305122014-01-30T23:24:32.919-06:002014-01-30T23:24:32.919-06:00Oh how sad and yet kind of freeing in the end of ...Oh how sad and yet kind of freeing in the end of that walk for Clarissa!Well written-very intense!Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-72885140214278766972014-01-30T10:46:09.082-06:002014-01-30T10:46:09.082-06:00I agree with Morgan about the stanza "she wal...I agree with Morgan about the stanza "she walked." It did feel like footsteps. I had an odd interpretation of this story. It seemed to be in the end she died and found the place of peace, but that was just an impression:~)<br /><br />I enjoyed reading this story and how you led her through the woods, This was a line that resonated with me and was written very well: "Somewhere after that first hour, the memory of what she had been seemed to slide away, like the drops of moisture covering the trees." I like this line:~)<br /><br />Thanks for sharing this story. Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-26228590274923946162014-01-30T10:27:48.237-06:002014-01-30T10:27:48.237-06:00Love the repetition of walk. Such a beautiful jour...Love the repetition of walk. Such a beautiful journey.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-63860459369281957712014-01-29T20:52:43.070-06:002014-01-29T20:52:43.070-06:00Love this piece, although I'm too tired right ...Love this piece, although I'm too tired right now to articulate why. That image though... so beautiful.Julihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10097214923216967086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-31948163613289047252014-01-29T14:03:51.052-06:002014-01-29T14:03:51.052-06:00I agree with Morgan, this is really powerful and t...I agree with Morgan, this is really powerful and the desperation to lose her pain really shines through. I love it. LM xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-54368058388254005192014-01-29T09:41:52.442-06:002014-01-29T09:41:52.442-06:00whew. That was powerful. The way you staggered the...whew. That was powerful. The way you staggered the stanza, "she walked", felt like footsteps. Well done.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.com