tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post6441085608552608292..comments2024-03-28T17:29:41.606-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: The DreamTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-10929296705942726822013-08-09T09:40:55.254-05:002013-08-09T09:40:55.254-05:00Dreams are so real for kids that they can seep int...Dreams are so real for kids that they can seep into adults' heads, too. Jan Wilberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05892767357578956520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-74386047428454517612013-08-08T19:41:15.223-05:002013-08-08T19:41:15.223-05:00Oh, yikes!! Poor little girl--but there's no w...Oh, yikes!! Poor little girl--but there's no way her mom's not going in after her, hopefully with a bazooka up her sleeve. (And that's why I'm glad you've left us with an ambiguous ending--we can make it happy or horrifying, depending on our threshold for creepiness). Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00736632012288650571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-59956363815650438872013-08-08T19:27:47.848-05:002013-08-08T19:27:47.848-05:00Oh, thanks, because I needed another reason to hat...Oh, thanks, because I needed another reason to hate hospitals...<br />Cute, terrifying, and good.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-54119075850114096602013-08-08T15:08:57.995-05:002013-08-08T15:08:57.995-05:00Cool creepy. I saw that kangaroo photo and had no ...Cool creepy. I saw that kangaroo photo and had no inspiration. A three-fer...well done! I totally empathize with the whining. You write whining perfectly ♥Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-485845756904121362013-08-08T14:58:03.294-05:002013-08-08T14:58:03.294-05:00Yup. Creepy. Love the creativity here. If/when you...Yup. Creepy. Love the creativity here. If/when you revisit, the POV wobbles in spots, and the dialogue is written in such a way that I thought there were three people in the car. But these are minor, minor fixes. <br /><br />But a long day at the office certainly makes for a powerful muse. This was a killer plot twist. Well done!Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-75525713665583830022013-08-08T13:31:28.266-05:002013-08-08T13:31:28.266-05:00I was so sure she was gonna die, and I'm so ha...I was so sure she was gonna die, and I'm so happy she didn't.<br />I have had many, many dreams like that.<br />Without the kangaroo tails, though. hahahakymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-60038003529811665982013-08-08T12:36:14.625-05:002013-08-08T12:36:14.625-05:00Yikes! I hope those monsters in my kids closet don...Yikes! I hope those monsters in my kids closet don't appear tonight. Scary! LOL. Ashley Kagaoanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881825157237244934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-8735588149865508292013-08-08T11:50:02.433-05:002013-08-08T11:50:02.433-05:00Ha! I knew it!! The turning point for me was that ...Ha! I knew it!! The turning point for me was that Candace was willing to go to another hospital, just not that one. I hope Candace taps into previously hidden power and kicks that killer Roo's butt. Great job with both prompts, WOE stumped me this week.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-61248076839262985272013-08-07T23:16:04.875-05:002013-08-07T23:16:04.875-05:00Time to bust her out of there! I have a child wit...Time to bust her out of there! I have a child with an over-active imagination and I could totally see myself as the parent convincing the child there was nothing to be afraid of.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-62282003745826487432013-08-07T19:19:45.118-05:002013-08-07T19:19:45.118-05:00Creepy!! My parents had friends whose little girl...Creepy!! My parents had friends whose little girl needed some simple procedure done at the hospital. She was terrified to go in, screamed, begged, pleaded. She wound up dying on the table. This, obviously, reminds me of that. Scary!! Thanks for linking up.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-63089440597419152022013-08-07T15:54:25.792-05:002013-08-07T15:54:25.792-05:00PERFECT ending. PERFECT ending. angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-57097534077766275522013-08-07T15:36:09.620-05:002013-08-07T15:36:09.620-05:00It may have been a long day at the office, but it ...It may have been a long day at the office, but it was creative. I liked the story, even if it was a little creepy.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16666910475457302786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-10207804965795377472013-08-07T14:21:28.781-05:002013-08-07T14:21:28.781-05:00Dude. That ending was perfectly terrifying.Dude. That ending was perfectly terrifying.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-88490367954336786862013-08-07T14:21:01.789-05:002013-08-07T14:21:01.789-05:00Oh the places prompts and long days at the office ...Oh the places prompts and long days at the office will take us! It reads like a Twilight Zone episode. I can hear Rod Serling's voice narrating. Imaginative and creative.Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117409443842865395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-17418978263574033922013-08-07T11:33:02.616-05:002013-08-07T11:33:02.616-05:00Oh man, that is terrifying. I love it!Oh man, that is terrifying. I love it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08420809700240691057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-84157526117573996782013-08-07T07:17:59.495-05:002013-08-07T07:17:59.495-05:00Ack! I knew that child knew what she was talking a...Ack! I knew that child knew what she was talking about. You definitely have the creep factor down and I like it.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.com