tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post6367042249943478560..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: GratitudeTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-67668622282362573402011-04-10T16:50:17.434-05:002011-04-10T16:50:17.434-05:00Yes, shocking ending. Yes, horrible ending. Yes, g...Yes, shocking ending. Yes, horrible ending. Yes, good writing!ShanimalsCrackers.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04204883255991927195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-77983525067071875412011-04-09T13:58:00.148-05:002011-04-09T13:58:00.148-05:00Wow! I'm in shock. I have nothing to add just....Wow! I'm in shock. I have nothing to add just...wow. This did NOT go the direction I assumed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-83085314078365388482011-04-08T23:10:46.074-05:002011-04-08T23:10:46.074-05:00IjI I, too, am visiting from #TRDC. This reads au...IjI I, too, am visiting from #TRDC. This reads authentic and because of that, you drew me in. I like how you depicted the impulsiveness of youth - just how they can act without thinking and I felt the tension between the main character and his brother. An emotionally charged piece. <br /><br />A good read.Melaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15014066951851923567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-64988423231315821022011-04-08T20:49:33.667-05:002011-04-08T20:49:33.667-05:00I like the Hulk figure and the appearance of two -...I like the Hulk figure and the appearance of two - I think that's very creative. One thing I would've like to have seen is an early clue that maybe it was a rough neighborhood. I think then the events might not have felt as abrupt (but then again, maybe you were wanting the abruptness)Lisa @ Two Bears Farmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03464839163693785901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-9687325932104300962011-04-08T15:29:27.164-05:002011-04-08T15:29:27.164-05:00I"m here from #TRDC and this was powerful. GO...I"m here from #TRDC and this was powerful. GOOD. Very good and sad. I'm a Law & Order addict and this stunned me the way the end of those episodes do sometimes,.I think that that writing like this having this kind of prose come out of you is always a good thing. Don't apologize for what your brain works out for you. <br /><br />it was GOOD.Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-15290866091243902512011-04-08T15:25:10.199-05:002011-04-08T15:25:10.199-05:00Wow. I may need to read this again before I can tr...Wow. I may need to read this again before I can truly process it. Wow, it's heavy, I am totally lost in the last few moments. I first thought it was a big sister, because you're a woman (fiction or not) and it got me thinking of how I protected my brother once growing up and how I should have written that story ... and then I kept reading and was like, holy crap. Holy sh!t. Seriously. Wow.Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972798018825603047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-36295257130096677802011-04-08T12:05:32.491-05:002011-04-08T12:05:32.491-05:00Wow! This is...powerful, to say the least. I don&...Wow! This is...powerful, to say the least. I don't know that it's the most shocking thing I've ever read - more sad than anything else. But like you said, sometimes you just write things and that's the way they come out - that's all.MrsJenBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10210080304270799102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-77036577466800587862011-04-08T06:14:25.304-05:002011-04-08T06:14:25.304-05:00I know it's horrible, but when I was writing i...I know it's horrible, but when I was writing it, that is the way it came out. It is definitely something that I would never want to happen to anyone!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-77368144688858942552011-04-08T05:54:47.614-05:002011-04-08T05:54:47.614-05:00Oh my God. I understand that this is fiction, but ...Oh my God. I understand that this is fiction, but why would you right this? I am sorry, I read your blog often and I have to say, this is the most shocking thing I have ever read. It might be written as fictional, but I am sure there is a story just like this out there that is real. WOW. I really am not sure what to say more than that. ~KMKrafty Max Originalshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07073275679579861153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-5801942449372794882011-04-08T05:54:07.967-05:002011-04-08T05:54:07.967-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Krafty Max Originalshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07073275679579861153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-75661358445718227252011-04-08T05:51:56.354-05:002011-04-08T05:51:56.354-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Krafty Max Originalshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07073275679579861153noreply@blogger.com