tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post4996684675380852878..comments2024-03-18T06:32:30.349-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: X Marks The SpotTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-82703669336062878022012-04-30T00:33:27.786-05:002012-04-30T00:33:27.786-05:00I think I'll sleep with a nightlight on tonigh...I think I'll sleep with a nightlight on tonight. Chilling.Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-1231858788553562832012-04-29T16:39:42.692-05:002012-04-29T16:39:42.692-05:00Oooh, that sneaky Calvin--showing up in the A-Z! T...Oooh, that sneaky Calvin--showing up in the A-Z! This is not my favorite part of her story (imagine that), but this is some mighty fine writing!!!!Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01294308714313220666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-30927572635111215022012-04-28T16:21:56.788-05:002012-04-28T16:21:56.788-05:00"Fear became my sister in the darkness."..."Fear became my sister in the darkness."<br /><br />I wish I'd written that.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-9197108258899877262012-04-27T21:51:40.451-05:002012-04-27T21:51:40.451-05:00Interesting reading and I agree with the comment f...Interesting reading and I agree with the comment from Kimberly about it being cinematic..visiting via the A to Z Challenge..blessings<br /><br />http://shananagins2468.blogspot.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-67952749270441372032012-04-27T18:46:08.160-05:002012-04-27T18:46:08.160-05:00the comment above really hit what i got from this ...the comment above really hit what i got from this piece--like a play---love it--xcellent!Lynn Proctorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349867270815243053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-5842789448275107292012-04-27T18:00:45.806-05:002012-04-27T18:00:45.806-05:00Thank you. Coming from you, that is high praise!Thank you. Coming from you, that is high praise!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-40586819799881124262012-04-27T17:31:51.002-05:002012-04-27T17:31:51.002-05:00This could be a play...or a film. It is cinematic...This could be a play...or a film. It is cinematic. Uncomfortable, dark, scary. Great writing.kimberlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01512573342918958641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-65343942738635712682012-04-27T16:37:07.089-05:002012-04-27T16:37:07.089-05:00wow. this was an awesome read. I love the repeti...wow. this was an awesome read. I love the repetitiveness, understanding the chaos in her head, and then the determination at the end. Awesome.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06666555088992266185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-33059421348036938352012-04-27T15:50:49.025-05:002012-04-27T15:50:49.025-05:00Incredibly hard to read, because it reads "re...Incredibly hard to read, because it reads "real." Does that make sense?<br /><br />I think the repetition really works as a narrative device. And I so want her to hit that spot.Nancy Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313721217543578257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-16615263241375708432012-04-27T15:42:34.832-05:002012-04-27T15:42:34.832-05:00What a powerful piece! I could see this expanding...What a powerful piece! I could see this expanding into an even grittier and edgier piece without the word limit.dontpanic2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/03748395349482914590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-74756401164934925532012-04-27T15:27:42.914-05:002012-04-27T15:27:42.914-05:00Deep and amazing writingDeep and amazing writingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03593523034769971203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-78033519368217919012012-04-27T14:26:20.417-05:002012-04-27T14:26:20.417-05:00Wow! The line about his mole was my favorite. I al...Wow! The line about his mole was my favorite. I also enjoyed how you described the darkness as a sister she prayed to. No margarita's involved... you're a good writer.Lindy Phippen Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13797304779576056899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-81838002227107205322012-04-27T13:54:04.322-05:002012-04-27T13:54:04.322-05:00You're not just saying that because I offered ...You're not just saying that because I offered you a margarita, right? ;)TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-7005136798126504852012-04-27T13:53:18.969-05:002012-04-27T13:53:18.969-05:00Thank you for commenting! I really appreciate your...Thank you for commenting! I really appreciate your feedback.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-38851196051606892012-04-27T13:51:44.633-05:002012-04-27T13:51:44.633-05:00Thank you. It was difficult to write.Thank you. It was difficult to write.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-52282070128927263962012-04-27T09:09:16.715-05:002012-04-27T09:09:16.715-05:00That is good. And you're a good writer. You ...That is good. And you're a good writer. You know that, right?Lizbethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03449627964374811836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-16880865981584191312012-04-27T08:54:20.587-05:002012-04-27T08:54:20.587-05:00Whoa. That is deeply disturbing, and full of raw e...Whoa. That is deeply disturbing, and full of raw emotional power. Your imagery is so vivid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com