tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post4437207562866141804..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: Just Pretend You're AsleepTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-86492758476236289172012-10-26T06:28:51.447-05:002012-10-26T06:28:51.447-05:00No one was there, thank goodness! I probably would...No one was there, thank goodness! I probably would have expired on the spot if there had been. But it seemed so real!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-41146439531903956212012-10-25T21:45:11.996-05:002012-10-25T21:45:11.996-05:00This is a terrifying scene! So, did you find anyo...This is a terrifying scene! So, did you find anyone there when you finally rolled over?<br /><br />I don't know if I could pretend to sleep. I could imagine me screaming at the top of my lungs, waking everyone in the hotel, only to find nothing there :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-18864025378440987552012-10-25T09:49:05.653-05:002012-10-25T09:49:05.653-05:00I would freak the f*** out if I felt something in ...I would freak the f*** out if I felt something in my bed with me. >__<<br />I always thought if you covered your ears with the blanket, the monsters couldn't get into your head. :DDraughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-44448395981288664352012-10-25T06:21:00.956-05:002012-10-25T06:21:00.956-05:00WOW...you ROCK the scary out of me!!! Great job!! ...WOW...you ROCK the scary out of me!!! Great job!! I have never had that experience..so I cannot imagine the fear you built up here so cleverly. Mine is <a href="http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com/2012/10/100-words-challenge-undead-are-immortals.html" rel="nofollow"> here</a><br />Have you a BLESSED WEEK!!!<br />hugs<br />shakiraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10264352891639027269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-18803716052153934402012-10-25T00:59:35.363-05:002012-10-25T00:59:35.363-05:00Love the character's inner monologue, especial... Love the character's inner monologue, especially when she's trying to talk herself out of her terror ... and how whatever it was sighed, and the air swirled with purpose ... Nice finish.karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15428202747324083680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-39984424102367154732012-10-24T21:58:59.626-05:002012-10-24T21:58:59.626-05:00my youngest girls, 8 and 9, insist on the hall lig...my youngest girls, 8 and 9, insist on the hall light being on and the cloest door being closed.<br /><br />great job with the short choppy sentences racheting up the terror.<br /><br />good pieceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-53398932146217773492012-10-24T18:56:09.363-05:002012-10-24T18:56:09.363-05:00Great post. Sometimes when I hear a noise and I l...Great post. Sometimes when I hear a noise and I lay there asleep, I wonder if im fooling anybody. great minds...Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-11696374178509963562012-10-24T18:28:30.562-05:002012-10-24T18:28:30.562-05:00Oh boy! You with no word limit would be pure surpr...Oh boy! You with no word limit would be pure surprise and awesomeness! Wed be along for the ride. <br /><br />Great, just great! I AM alone in a hotel room and will be remembering this story in a few hours! Help me now...Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-77306114723406950282012-10-24T16:21:19.222-05:002012-10-24T16:21:19.222-05:00Just imagine if I didn't have a word limit!Just imagine if I didn't have a word limit!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-48409716298362063002012-10-24T16:01:14.563-05:002012-10-24T16:01:14.563-05:00You're such a tease. Have I said that before?...You're such a tease. Have I said that before?!?! Evocative atmosphere full of menace and foreboding ...Red Nomad OZhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03020668094026661054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-53938930608584050842012-10-24T07:51:53.737-05:002012-10-24T07:51:53.737-05:00This actually happened to me! I woke up, and you c...This actually happened to me! I woke up, and you could not have convinced me that there was not someone right behind me. It took an hour before I had the courage to turn over!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-30572862648026937562012-10-24T07:14:42.683-05:002012-10-24T07:14:42.683-05:00Eeeek! I was once supposed to stay in a hotel room...Eeeek! I was once supposed to stay in a hotel room by myself and checked out after about an hour...am pretty sure this will insure that I never manage!Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01294308714313220666noreply@blogger.com