tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post4134316764640094061..comments2024-03-28T17:29:41.606-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: WOE: ActiveTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-33035724988594428032012-06-25T18:23:58.197-05:002012-06-25T18:23:58.197-05:00Wow. For so few words you created one heck of an ...Wow. For so few words you created one heck of an opening! I, too, would love to see where this could go.dontpanic2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/03748395349482914590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-3965789195794206622012-06-24T12:01:32.411-05:002012-06-24T12:01:32.411-05:00Zombies! I love Zombie stories. Have you seen Shaw...Zombies! I love Zombie stories. Have you seen Shawn of the Dead? Fido?<br /><br />Love the "favorite gun" bit. When my brother was a police officer, he named his service pistol "Rachel, the lightning rapier of death". For some reason, that's where I went. Very nicely done!Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-80317466123789759532012-06-23T22:20:07.138-05:002012-06-23T22:20:07.138-05:00There are a lot of questions here, huh? Nice activ...There are a lot of questions here, huh? Nice active voice!Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-15664762750202908922012-06-23T13:11:25.670-05:002012-06-23T13:11:25.670-05:00Very nice. Made me very curious as to why she need...Very nice. Made me very curious as to why she needed a gun.Patricia JLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582005500429122486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-81056788615873045342012-06-22T22:58:18.477-05:002012-06-22T22:58:18.477-05:00Well, I was thinking about zombies, but that's...Well, I was thinking about zombies, but that's just because I'm reading World War Z right now...TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-38277342670539339222012-06-22T22:57:45.759-05:002012-06-22T22:57:45.759-05:00Thanks! I got it!Thanks! I got it!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-79527747480285540142012-06-22T20:53:49.311-05:002012-06-22T20:53:49.311-05:00Yikes! That was very active and exciting!
You do...Yikes! That was very active and exciting! <br /><br />You do need to check this sentence: "...she found herself deposited her a mile..." is "her" extra? Or supposed to be something else?Suzanne Earleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18385498304922239050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-72679150045774358302012-06-22T19:50:42.955-05:002012-06-22T19:50:42.955-05:00Very nice... so many questions now.... how old is ...Very nice... so many questions now.... how old is Catherine? A mile isn't so far, but what could she be confronted with that could take up 400 pages in a novel? <br /><br />So many questions...Julihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10097214923216967086noreply@blogger.com