tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post2145227521484354118..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: Role ReversalTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-2735976209031084292012-10-27T14:49:01.049-05:002012-10-27T14:49:01.049-05:00Thank you. I need to proofread better!Thank you. I need to proofread better!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-8845269560443869942012-10-27T14:48:00.302-05:002012-10-27T14:48:00.302-05:00Thank you. I am glad you noticed that!Thank you. I am glad you noticed that!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-40204549980463254072012-10-26T21:51:39.065-05:002012-10-26T21:51:39.065-05:00I'm here from WriteOnEdge. Well done! Like Car...I'm here from WriteOnEdge. Well done! Like Carrie up there ^, I wish that I could get my husband to lean up the kitchen! Good stuff. ;-) Come check out my piece.Renee Schuls-Jacobsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10987735882275763051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-8494904774535995032012-10-26T20:23:53.045-05:002012-10-26T20:23:53.045-05:00Makes me wish my husband could be so easy to manip...Makes me wish my husband could be so easy to manipulate :)Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-34149022502884009772012-10-26T15:08:31.500-05:002012-10-26T15:08:31.500-05:00Honestly I found it humorous.... The conversation ...Honestly I found it humorous.... The conversation between the two in the middle lightened the mood.<br />Also, I would have done the same thing... the order to do the dishes that is. <br />If only my husband would play along.<br /><br />But if you were going for hot...you nailed it too. <br />Well done.Mad Woman behind the Bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01242756976126497437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-31888884290435925962012-10-26T14:06:26.242-05:002012-10-26T14:06:26.242-05:00This line threw me a little:
his was Ashton's...This line threw me a little:<br /><br />his was Ashton's house call, he provided the toys and his session was rapidly coming to an end.<br /><br />but I think your narrator's voice is spot on ... the shift from dabbling submissive to comfortable dom was a great shift in energy without being over-the-top.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-68853046032650601452012-10-26T11:40:32.175-05:002012-10-26T11:40:32.175-05:00I agree with the other commentators, where I got c...I agree with the other commentators, where I got confused was: "And besides, that's not what you are here for. I just wanted to see what all the fuss is about." Because it implied to me that it was his house. <br /><br />I really felt the piece hit its stride when she went back to being Dom and thought that paragraph was really well written. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-74635042811807849742012-10-26T10:14:12.701-05:002012-10-26T10:14:12.701-05:00Same on the paid visit versus recreational call!
...Same on the paid visit versus recreational call!<br /><br />Your narrator's voice was a pleasure ;)<br /><br />"I enjoyed such pleasures immensely, and was quivering in delight even before the punishment began" - the combination of such a cold beginning with such a visceral word like "quivering" was excellent.<br /><br />:)<br />barbara @ de rebus<br />www(dot)barbaragildea(dot)comBarbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05481035784237871634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-6794228030281950902012-10-26T08:42:38.593-05:002012-10-26T08:42:38.593-05:00I think it takes some guts to write from this pers...I think it takes some guts to write from this perspective. Well done.<br /><br />I especially enjoyed the opening para.Tina L. Hookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12780807680745838371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-61482989692371029792012-10-26T07:57:55.373-05:002012-10-26T07:57:55.373-05:00Well, if I were a dom, I certainly would want to d...Well, if I were a dom, I certainly would want to demonstrate my dominance by getting some housework done. You know, since men traditionally avoid such things.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-7583495673751521482012-10-26T07:54:47.422-05:002012-10-26T07:54:47.422-05:00I was thinking along the lines of a 'booty cal...I was thinking along the lines of a 'booty call' when I called it a house call. It seemed too much to call a bondage session a booty call, you know?<br /><br />But these two do have a long and committed relationship, so old married couple would probably apply.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-40559249181115780082012-10-26T06:52:35.474-05:002012-10-26T06:52:35.474-05:00Nice! I especially loved the ending. First time I&...Nice! I especially loved the ending. First time I've read the dominated being the dominatrix but it was an interesting twist.Yvonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-48795745123759137092012-10-26T02:09:51.822-05:002012-10-26T02:09:51.822-05:00And all that jazz. I too wondered about the paid v...And all that jazz. I too wondered about the paid visit or the regular relationship. Other than that though, very well done. Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-38509151330388758392012-10-26T00:50:56.335-05:002012-10-26T00:50:56.335-05:00I love the interplay between these two! How they c...I love the interplay between these two! How they can pause and rearrange their situation and then continue on. But I was a little confused about the term "house call." That made me think that one or the other of them is being paid for the bondage time. The end remark about cleaning the kitchen made me think they had a "normal" relation, and might even be an old married couple playing with BDSM. If in the beginning she's taking her "turn" at being bound, even though it seems the "usual" situation is her dominating him, then the "old married couple" thing works really well. But if she's a paid dom, or even his regular dom, then it's confusing why she would be bound in the beginning (although since that's the prompt, of course it must be included :) I haven't read a lot of BDSM, but what I've learned is that it's unusual for a person to be both the dominant and the dominated. (A switch.)<br /><br />I vote for the "old married couple" scenario! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-68589642661219409112012-10-26T00:19:39.671-05:002012-10-26T00:19:39.671-05:00Ha! Nice twist at the end!Ha! Nice twist at the end!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com