tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post1009417628448156407..comments2024-03-28T17:29:41.606-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: UnraveledTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-80484707206527544972014-05-15T16:19:54.535-05:002014-05-15T16:19:54.535-05:00I like a spooky story:~) I was glad the old woman ...I like a spooky story:~) I was glad the old woman gave this guy his comeuppance. I also thought it was clever how you approached it with her unraveling the stitch, which unraveled him. <br /><br />You kept me in suspense until the end. Even though I knew something was up, I didn't expect the old woman. You did an excellent job of making her seem innocent...just another "murder groupie." <br /><br />Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-16996487195840817132014-05-15T14:55:32.811-05:002014-05-15T14:55:32.811-05:00OH I loved this, I keep coming back to read it and...OH I loved this, I keep coming back to read it and I love the supernatural part of it, how she unravels him. It's so well written it could be a Twilight Zone episode. Such good writing! Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-64160232056981487042014-05-14T15:48:34.319-05:002014-05-14T15:48:34.319-05:00Whoa. Justice is served. I enjoyed the dialogue be...Whoa. Justice is served. I enjoyed the dialogue between the guards, good backstory and you snuck in great details that helped us feel the claustrophobia in the court room. Well done.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-46956279351012560712014-05-14T10:29:13.706-05:002014-05-14T10:29:13.706-05:00That story rocks! This is definitely one that cou...That story rocks! This is definitely one that could be expanded. You did plenty of foreshadowing but very subtly. Lyssa M xLyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.com