tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post9189291132761486884..comments2024-03-28T17:29:41.606-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: Hazardous DutyTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-47023957392290799502013-09-12T20:47:56.262-05:002013-09-12T20:47:56.262-05:00Ah, that's haunting!! Random thought, but thi...Ah, that's haunting!! Random thought, but this reminded me of when I was in social work school. I worked closely with a woman who was a pioneer in infant mental health. She often dealt with babies who were with their mothers when they died. Sad, sad stuff. Anyway, thanks for linking up.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-44948155128652598452013-09-12T20:47:26.020-05:002013-09-12T20:47:26.020-05:00Very vivid, but I must say, I hope I never live th...Very vivid, but I must say, I hope I never live this.Julihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10097214923216967086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-56425304791044896862013-09-12T20:01:05.878-05:002013-09-12T20:01:05.878-05:00This is a grim but wonderfully written tale. The d...This is a grim but wonderfully written tale. The descriptive detail makes the action vivid and real. Very well done. lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-21932226169180102272013-09-12T14:51:02.659-05:002013-09-12T14:51:02.659-05:00What a terrible scenario -painted so strongly!Love...What a terrible scenario -painted so strongly!Loved the details!Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-18594075074397876932013-09-12T10:24:34.838-05:002013-09-12T10:24:34.838-05:00I love the attention to detail in the first few se...I love the attention to detail in the first few sentences. You get "to know" her a bit in an unusual situation.<br /><br />well writtenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-54655546579590301442013-09-11T19:00:59.481-05:002013-09-11T19:00:59.481-05:00This is really good. Vivid images. I could see the...This is really good. Vivid images. I could see the whole thing really well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-30273633460197303362013-09-11T18:58:47.527-05:002013-09-11T18:58:47.527-05:00Great survival story!Great survival story!Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-861284838301272082013-09-11T16:43:05.332-05:002013-09-11T16:43:05.332-05:00The cool, distant voice works this piece so well, ...The cool, distant voice works this piece so well, Tina! Agree with the others about the 'snap', and the difference between the mother's 'clutch' and Karen's 'tuck' is brutal.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-39935084405461634232013-09-11T15:50:38.081-05:002013-09-11T15:50:38.081-05:00I cringed at the 'snap' when she took the ...I cringed at the 'snap' when she took the baby, too. "She prayed this one would live"- that last line says so much...she lives in a devastated world and she's lived this scene before.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-45350547196644753362013-09-11T14:06:55.465-05:002013-09-11T14:06:55.465-05:00OH my, what a great and horrific piece. I am awed ...OH my, what a great and horrific piece. I am awed by the descriptions and the words and then my stomach drops at the thought of this "work" and if it will ever have to happen. <br /><br />WOW.Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-43304308530589780572013-09-11T11:35:06.536-05:002013-09-11T11:35:06.536-05:00And.......need the rest of the story.....I don'...And.......need the rest of the story.....I don't do well with snippets darn it!!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18110473423243606562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-16032997773001570762013-09-11T09:46:13.785-05:002013-09-11T09:46:13.785-05:00I agree that 'snap' was perfectly creepy. ...I agree that 'snap' was perfectly creepy. I also loved the tucking of the baby into her pack and the implication in the last line that this kind of thing happens often. <br /><br />Great read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-38277332432863127932013-09-11T08:04:21.213-05:002013-09-11T08:04:21.213-05:00You really set a vivid scene. I actually winced at...You really set a vivid scene. I actually winced at the "snap" of the dead mother's arms. Ewww!<br /><br />Well done. :)Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.com