tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post8958205918740177736..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: CadenceTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-3072270850431464542018-10-05T07:53:12.105-05:002018-10-05T07:53:12.105-05:00Thank you for your works.Thank you for your works.Jessicahttp://www.pinkasianmassage.co.uk/meet-jessica-girl.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-78059760217027285892013-12-31T00:00:11.794-06:002013-12-31T00:00:11.794-06:00Oh yes, I know how that is. :) Sometimes even when...Oh yes, I know how that is. :) Sometimes even when I re-read three times, I still miss things. Argh! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-28474403718120795852013-12-30T06:09:32.087-06:002013-12-30T06:09:32.087-06:00Cool response to the prompt. Transparent carnal t...Cool response to the prompt. Transparent carnal thoughts. . .yeah. That resonated. :-) Thanks for linking up.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-74870525333895400072013-12-28T14:17:42.510-06:002013-12-28T14:17:42.510-06:00Way to leave us hanging! :)
Great cliffhanger. Ca...Way to leave us hanging! :)<br /><br />Great cliffhanger. Can't wait to see where this goes. Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-27881771288611574762013-12-27T16:50:17.028-06:002013-12-27T16:50:17.028-06:00Intriguing... I want more.Intriguing... I want more.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-74159609332950977852013-12-27T11:49:06.565-06:002013-12-27T11:49:06.565-06:00Thank you. I try to read and edit, but after a few...Thank you. I try to read and edit, but after a few times, things blur.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-24815357551487936472013-12-26T22:05:13.711-06:002013-12-26T22:05:13.711-06:00Oh I want to know so much more. I hope you keep wr...Oh I want to know so much more. I hope you keep writing this story. <br /><br />A small but of concrit: I like how you wrote "Cadence stormed off" and then "Her storm ended suddenly" but using stormed again in the sentence between those two felt like too much repetition to me. <br /><br />Same thing with using the word still two times so close together in the last full paragraph. Once it is powerful, twice feels cluttered. <br /><br />The story is excellent overall. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com