tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post8765960476651935597..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: Microfiction: Mama SaidTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-49797824999407788512014-10-08T15:43:22.039-05:002014-10-08T15:43:22.039-05:00Love the voice! Your 42 words pack a mean punch. N...Love the voice! Your 42 words pack a mean punch. Nice job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-35063625866355389882014-10-08T14:37:06.704-05:002014-10-08T14:37:06.704-05:00Wonderful voice this mama has, but she is obviousl...Wonderful voice this mama has, but she is obviously a woman not to be crossed. Fantastic how you got so much story into this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-32201181011997568972014-10-08T12:28:08.195-05:002014-10-08T12:28:08.195-05:00Very vivid! Especially that accent.Very vivid! Especially that accent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-23480084618376155712014-10-08T11:20:04.984-05:002014-10-08T11:20:04.984-05:00The imagery complete with the accent you chose bro...The imagery complete with the accent you chose brought your character and story to life. Awesome!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-37537243627763215012014-10-08T06:17:28.001-05:002014-10-08T06:17:28.001-05:00Now that is a very vivid piece! Really striking.Now that is a very vivid piece! Really striking.Kinley Danehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02648398736837020249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-47395455224776492132014-10-07T07:06:37.879-05:002014-10-07T07:06:37.879-05:00Loved the accent, I could see that crazy, lust-fil...Loved the accent, I could see that crazy, lust-filled woman swaying. (Such a great word for the waiting..the swaying) <br />Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.com