tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post8539181744559570029..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: BenedictionTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-8836695110781115902013-03-01T13:51:20.104-06:002013-03-01T13:51:20.104-06:00Ooh, could it be forgiveness? I think a stronger, ...Ooh, could it be forgiveness? I think a stronger, more story-subplot-driven explanation should be because he's tied to her. He doesn't have a choice. Wouldn't that make it all the torturous? For her to know that he's with her, hating her, despising what she did to him, and yet he can't walk away? That way, the cold hand really carries the full weight of his wrath. It would be nice if you added something to the effect that she feels sharp pains every time he touches her, like you get when your hand has been immersed in ice or snow for too long. <br /><br />I love being at the crossroads of a tale like this, where there are so many possibilities where you could take this. Well done!Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-54899394311848293512013-03-01T07:51:38.177-06:002013-03-01T07:51:38.177-06:00Yes, he is deceased. Thank you for reading!Yes, he is deceased. Thank you for reading!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-53205343639900654492013-03-01T07:50:35.255-06:002013-03-01T07:50:35.255-06:00Maybe...thank you for your comment!Maybe...thank you for your comment!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-46170062314794676342013-03-01T07:49:45.647-06:002013-03-01T07:49:45.647-06:00Well, that is a relief!! Thank you.Well, that is a relief!! Thank you.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-3053452700148352082013-03-01T07:44:17.547-06:002013-03-01T07:44:17.547-06:00That kind of interference in the natural order nev...That kind of interference in the natural order never goes well, does it? It's sweet that he forgives her but I agree, the cold hand thing does not bode well for them...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-24470652443328042822013-03-01T05:33:34.626-06:002013-03-01T05:33:34.626-06:00This is a marvelous moment. It seems like a confli...This is a marvelous moment. It seems like a conflict that's been going on between men & women since the beginning of time. They want to go out in a blaze of glory and we want them to stick around--honor be damned. VictoriaKPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07987993161693042703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-27132804329948381542013-02-28T21:42:30.387-06:002013-02-28T21:42:30.387-06:00Thank you!Thank you!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-19491763623748334492013-02-28T21:39:38.468-06:002013-02-28T21:39:38.468-06:00I am a little curious, too! I have an idea, but we...I am a little curious, too! I have an idea, but we shall see.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-62209813273728298962013-02-28T21:37:50.217-06:002013-02-28T21:37:50.217-06:00Thank you!Thank you!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-87075975190912043682013-02-28T21:37:11.889-06:002013-02-28T21:37:11.889-06:00Thank you!Thank you!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-46066618957434240502013-02-28T15:14:36.337-06:002013-02-28T15:14:36.337-06:00Great writing, keep it up! I want to read more. ...Great writing, keep it up! I want to read more. Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241878931607653970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-68967132936535964532013-02-28T09:19:13.852-06:002013-02-28T09:19:13.852-06:00I fear that the respite of his fury may not be the...I fear that the respite of his fury may not be the end of their problems. It will be interesting to see how their relationship holds up to death avoided.<br />~AngelaWrite on Edgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01592841039929797829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-23140759608523329532013-02-28T07:59:06.678-06:002013-02-28T07:59:06.678-06:00The very air seemed to shimmer with the force of h...The very air seemed to shimmer with the force of his fury - terrific!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-25919505543491993732013-02-28T05:40:58.350-06:002013-02-28T05:40:58.350-06:00She would "try to drown her guilt in the drea...She would "try to drown her guilt in the dreaming..." is so poetic and descriptive. This is a wonderful piece of writing. lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-62590208165903781712013-02-28T00:21:11.521-06:002013-02-28T00:21:11.521-06:00I'm glad he forgave her. That was a sweet end...I'm glad he forgave her. That was a sweet ending!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-9919313683441985742013-02-27T19:13:41.431-06:002013-02-27T19:13:41.431-06:00great continuation to the story. love how this par...great continuation to the story. love how this particular excerpt ended :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-49636162460126104862013-02-27T18:30:24.386-06:002013-02-27T18:30:24.386-06:00I can't wait for the next part of this! I mean...I can't wait for the next part of this! I mean, will it be possible for them to have a "normal" relationship? I love the hot/cold hand thing -- so full of foreshadowing.Barbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05538106233407301480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-31895725397027360582013-02-27T16:48:36.427-06:002013-02-27T16:48:36.427-06:00Oh,sweet agony!He came to her-what next-how will t...Oh,sweet agony!He came to her-what next-how will they have a life-he is "dead",no?Am looking forward to the next part of this intriguing tale TMW:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-21483649976668602962013-02-27T16:39:29.926-06:002013-02-27T16:39:29.926-06:00Nice job with all the prompts. You set a nice mood...Nice job with all the prompts. You set a nice mood. A ghost story with a happy ending?tedstrutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09853272125990540823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-37496172681819378972013-02-27T15:26:50.172-06:002013-02-27T15:26:50.172-06:00Nice continuation of the story. Nicely written. I ...Nice continuation of the story. Nicely written. I can feel her regret and anticipation, her hope that he will come. No worries on the prompt word - the editors clarified that you can use it as either a noun or a verb.Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117409443842865395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-26120455718398225902013-02-27T14:34:09.045-06:002013-02-27T14:34:09.045-06:00Aw poop! That's what sleep deprivation will do...Aw poop! That's what sleep deprivation will do to a person. TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-82230857512264186362013-02-27T14:33:53.541-06:002013-02-27T14:33:53.541-06:00While my heart wants to be happy that he came back...While my heart wants to be happy that he came back to her - there is a bit of foreboding in the hot hand/cold hand reference. How does death and life live together? It will be curious to see this story develop.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-20724068959683059752013-02-27T14:14:21.326-06:002013-02-27T14:14:21.326-06:00This is a good take on the prompts. My first try o...This is a good take on the prompts. My first try on the Trifecta, like yours picked up on the verb to doctor and the actual prompt was a noun. katie eggemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00615362861509258088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-54210316064526921282013-02-27T11:08:12.314-06:002013-02-27T11:08:12.314-06:00Another powerful part to a wonderful story.Another powerful part to a wonderful story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-20779601840857355812013-02-27T08:29:13.191-06:002013-02-27T08:29:13.191-06:00Awww, he forgave her (: Such a sweet little contin...Awww, he forgave her (: Such a sweet little continuation.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.com