tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post693687581679505607..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: MoneyTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-47433569158790746092012-10-07T20:39:43.680-05:002012-10-07T20:39:43.680-05:00I love when people conjure the lesser known demons...I love when people conjure the lesser known demons. Poor Cat.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-75436384048642630162012-10-07T09:42:35.330-05:002012-10-07T09:42:35.330-05:00You know, I am not sure. Another writing assignmen...You know, I am not sure. Another writing assignment, perhaps!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-29746399002492586702012-10-06T15:15:13.722-05:002012-10-06T15:15:13.722-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-81406537064190071862012-10-06T13:51:13.381-05:002012-10-06T13:51:13.381-05:00Great world building. I was curious though, whethe...Great world building. I was curious though, whether she had sold her soul 14 times or if 14 other people had ad it before, as if souls are recycled somehow.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-73405720989424037082012-10-05T15:53:42.327-05:002012-10-05T15:53:42.327-05:00Wonderful. I like how certain they both were and t...Wonderful. I like how certain they both were and the bit of backstory made it more interesting.Patricia JLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582005500429122486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-19356190628739840082012-10-05T12:56:01.405-05:002012-10-05T12:56:01.405-05:00Interesting ... the idea that she's been selli...Interesting ... the idea that she's been selling her soul all around town! I liked the feeling of being a bit unsure about who was in control of the situation, with Rufus emerging as the one with the upper hand as the piece unfolds.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-88770902392393849312012-10-05T12:24:22.189-05:002012-10-05T12:24:22.189-05:00Ohhhhhh.....I love this. LOVE IT!Ohhhhhh.....I love this. LOVE IT!Lizbethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03449627964374811836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-8658899173069354212012-10-05T11:59:34.358-05:002012-10-05T11:59:34.358-05:00You are quite right. I did not edit this with my u...You are quite right. I did not edit this with my usual focus!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-6393576058026921912012-10-05T11:49:37.234-05:002012-10-05T11:49:37.234-05:00I agree - great world-building... makes me want to...I agree - great world-building... makes me want to know about both of your characters!<br /><br />concrit: "He sat up, grabbed his clothes, and began dressing. She didn't get it, did not understand the implications of her choice." - I did have a little trouble here. Up to this line, the point of view is firmly a detached third person, not following any specific character, and then it jumps squarely into Rufus' pov. I think the first few sentence could easily be edited to fit more firmly with Rufus! <br /><br />- barbara @ de rebus<br />www(dot)barbaragildea(dot)comBarbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05481035784237871634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-59215904531149827492012-10-05T08:23:37.261-05:002012-10-05T08:23:37.261-05:00Oo. I like this. It's a great snippet of a s...Oo. I like this. It's a great snippet of a scene. I want to know more!dontpanic2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/03748395349482914590noreply@blogger.com