tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post6389303744268492493..comments2024-03-28T17:29:41.606-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: Write On Edge: RetributionTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-66314282153795043772012-04-02T15:38:16.200-05:002012-04-02T15:38:16.200-05:00very dark. I love the first line, and the image o...very dark. I love the first line, and the image of them creeping through the woods, all of them sharing in the death. ugh, such a creeper.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-89408334157653713052012-03-30T22:05:15.397-05:002012-03-30T22:05:15.397-05:00Oooooooh! You are so creative!Oooooooh! You are so creative!Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01294308714313220666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-50387457210928075272012-03-30T21:18:46.394-05:002012-03-30T21:18:46.394-05:00Line? What line? I didn't see any line. We wer...Line? What line? I didn't see any line. We were all at the movies, er well watching videos on the big screen when it happened. Honest Officer! Don't worry about the icepick in the trashcan...<br /><br />Great, moving, and so sweetly dark. Well done!Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-90098782686941783022012-03-30T19:20:52.961-05:002012-03-30T19:20:52.961-05:00Reminds me of an even more desperate "Despera...Reminds me of an even more desperate "Desperate Housewives!"<br />I love the line "...snored the sleep of a false innocence."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-7884676674840237222012-03-30T12:24:06.135-05:002012-03-30T12:24:06.135-05:00Oh my! I guess that he got what he deserved!Oh my! I guess that he got what he deserved!Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15012551542418581742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-25574394226128862262012-03-30T10:12:27.744-05:002012-03-30T10:12:27.744-05:00Is it wrong to love this piece as much as I do? I ...Is it wrong to love this piece as much as I do? I was completely hooked at that first line. Great job with the prompt!Betsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15396590193590796633noreply@blogger.com