tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post5406725014424085957..comments2024-03-28T17:29:41.606-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: SacrificesTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-20900428578793948962013-02-22T14:49:56.301-06:002013-02-22T14:49:56.301-06:00Okay, this was a great use of words: "spinnin...Okay, this was a great use of words: "spinning a web of words around her until there was no escape..." I love it. I liked the twist because I would have very mad at Svetlana had she made the other choice. I agree with lumdog2012 -- I wanted to scream at her...RUN! Sacrificing herself seemed unfair after what Gregory put her through.<br /><br />You do an excellent job of making me see the entire story with just this scene. That's difficult, especially with the word limit you had. Well done.<br /><br />Sara, A Sharing ConnectionSarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15995684156785464334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-61480287429251172472013-02-22T08:45:25.910-06:002013-02-22T08:45:25.910-06:00Enough to pay off Nikolai, I hope!Enough to pay off Nikolai, I hope!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-64398092304447980612013-02-21T23:17:24.619-06:002013-02-21T23:17:24.619-06:00Thank you!Thank you!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-25166908757044006842013-02-21T23:17:01.649-06:002013-02-21T23:17:01.649-06:00Thank you!Thank you!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-54874009945189520272013-02-21T20:39:50.321-06:002013-02-21T20:39:50.321-06:00Yes! I'm glad she got to him first. I didn&#...Yes! I'm glad she got to him first. I didn't like Gregor at all. I like how this multiple prompt response didn't seem forced.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-22881160776332290572013-02-21T12:28:11.301-06:002013-02-21T12:28:11.301-06:00Ah,I sensed this coming-you cannot keep pushing s...Ah,I sensed this coming-you cannot keep pushing someone indefinitely!Loved it-great story -you built it up perfectly-hurrah for Svetlana-great last line:-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-36381477537880412512013-02-21T08:21:11.804-06:002013-02-21T08:21:11.804-06:00Now *that* sounds like the right ending. You did ...Now *that* sounds like the right ending. You did an impressively seamless job working the prompts together; it all works in beautifully!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-47092900810052094412013-02-21T05:36:35.593-06:002013-02-21T05:36:35.593-06:00You were a has-been before you ever stepped on the...You were a has-been before you ever stepped on the stage.<br />Ouch. The trigger comeback is about as last word as it gets!<br />Great noir with a twist, Tina!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-84172878587550365802013-02-20T19:57:57.604-06:002013-02-20T19:57:57.604-06:00great story :) so glad it ended the way it did :)great story :) so glad it ended the way it did :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-72654328463905937712013-02-20T19:29:28.880-06:002013-02-20T19:29:28.880-06:00I loved this story! Very good! Held my interest al...I loved this story! Very good! Held my interest all the way through. Excellent and well-written! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-47533732715058064562013-02-20T19:21:12.252-06:002013-02-20T19:21:12.252-06:00I love how the one asking for a sacrifice turned o...I love how the one asking for a sacrifice turned out to make it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-50696701476401704012013-02-20T19:06:09.941-06:002013-02-20T19:06:09.941-06:00Well damn... I didn't see that coming, but goo...Well damn... I didn't see that coming, but good for her! Loved this!Flippa Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04829544779655351950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-25327892138543538592013-02-20T15:40:04.803-06:002013-02-20T15:40:04.803-06:00Nice work! This is why we don't talk finances...Nice work! This is why we don't talk finances over bottles of vodka. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-7758730628409253272013-02-20T14:26:17.677-06:002013-02-20T14:26:17.677-06:00I hope he felt it just-a-little...
I am surprised...I hope he felt it just-a-little...<br /><br />I am surprised she summoned the courage, but I'm glad she won't be terrorized by him any longer.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-19920851716264812013-02-20T10:08:11.552-06:002013-02-20T10:08:11.552-06:00Well frankly, he had it coming. What a feel good ...Well frankly, he had it coming. What a feel good ending.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-67399053031472714322013-02-20T10:05:44.224-06:002013-02-20T10:05:44.224-06:00Good for her! I wonder how much insurance he's...Good for her! I wonder how much insurance he's worth (:Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-19005749690345865752013-02-20T09:46:12.784-06:002013-02-20T09:46:12.784-06:00I love this! Such an excellent use of both prompts...I love this! Such an excellent use of both prompts, too. Good for Svetlana.Barbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05538106233407301480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-24704440704378976842013-02-20T08:51:28.408-06:002013-02-20T08:51:28.408-06:00Love this. Especially the ending except I'd ra...Love this. Especially the ending except I'd rather she run. Great one. Glad this is fiction. :)lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.com