tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post5002143594291524193..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: DoubtTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-80979914661725674092014-09-02T17:16:03.366-05:002014-09-02T17:16:03.366-05:00Fantastic metaphor and use of the title, Tina.Fantastic metaphor and use of the title, Tina.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-51453109586819704662014-09-02T14:18:38.041-05:002014-09-02T14:18:38.041-05:00Wonderful how you've embodied doubt - or rathe...Wonderful how you've embodied doubt - or rather it's not. I preferred it when I couldn't see it. Great take.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-79251317601629170102014-09-02T10:01:44.020-05:002014-09-02T10:01:44.020-05:00I would have been up all night knowing that thing ...I would have been up all night knowing that thing was lurking around!Jen Brunetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05394884068337771724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-57245553899453319102014-09-02T09:25:34.713-05:002014-09-02T09:25:34.713-05:00Oh, that calamitous creature, doubt. It seems it i...Oh, that calamitous creature, doubt. It seems it is small enough to creep over the window sill even with the window closed. I love the personification here and the skittering of the language when you're talking about your visitor, compared with the short, to-the-point language of your partner sleeping.silverleafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12708533897672928548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-30073212533529079432014-09-02T07:42:59.632-05:002014-09-02T07:42:59.632-05:00Great, great. The story, yes. The layers, yes. But...Great, great. The story, yes. The layers, yes. But especially how you use the rhythm of your lines for maximum impact.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16282412272082398849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-76549643136710689222014-09-02T06:37:44.973-05:002014-09-02T06:37:44.973-05:00Love your take on the prompt. Doubt certainly is a...Love your take on the prompt. Doubt certainly is a persistent creature. Nice one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-17594861453053652212014-09-02T05:14:25.734-05:002014-09-02T05:14:25.734-05:00Doubt could definitely be seen as a creature in it...Doubt could definitely be seen as a creature in its own right, no?Michelle Longohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15437193620480920753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-21778616316916445722014-09-01T22:26:46.236-05:002014-09-01T22:26:46.236-05:00Oh, doubt is such a nasty little creature. Though...Oh, doubt is such a nasty little creature. Thoughtful take on the prompt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-22296627873720032492014-09-01T22:11:41.460-05:002014-09-01T22:11:41.460-05:00I hope it wasn't doubt.I hope it wasn't doubt.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09526646692173867711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-17311670575442294192014-09-01T21:40:56.229-05:002014-09-01T21:40:56.229-05:00I hate when my partner sleeps through the whisperi...I hate when my partner sleeps through the whispering of grave calamities! ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-43747469651831904972014-09-01T18:05:48.979-05:002014-09-01T18:05:48.979-05:00Oh, no. Not again! It's the skittering that ge...Oh, no. Not again! It's the skittering that gets to me!<br />Love this, Tina!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-71665092172212674752014-09-01T10:09:42.026-05:002014-09-01T10:09:42.026-05:00So two things came in through the window! You did ...So two things came in through the window! You did a good job of capturing that new relationship middle of the night loneliness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com