tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post2613902234396129261..comments2024-03-18T06:32:30.349-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: White SmokeTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-73565052718462291772013-08-29T19:48:54.708-05:002013-08-29T19:48:54.708-05:00heartbreaking and gorgeousheartbreaking and gorgeousAgincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-12237516169286977202013-08-29T12:53:25.990-05:002013-08-29T12:53:25.990-05:00oh my. so sad. :(oh my. so sad. :(Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-35688636368066441662013-08-29T11:44:29.548-05:002013-08-29T11:44:29.548-05:00Sweet little story. You pulled us into Lilly'...Sweet little story. You pulled us into Lilly's sadness quickly, but left me with a lingering sadness for Grandpa. Getting old is hard.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02173810987391935584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-85493612731881282013-08-29T10:23:51.739-05:002013-08-29T10:23:51.739-05:00What a lovely, tangible tale of grief. What a lovely, tangible tale of grief. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-64771111914533342262013-08-29T10:07:42.641-05:002013-08-29T10:07:42.641-05:00This was incredibly poignant. Oh, my heart!This was incredibly poignant. Oh, my heart!Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-11206343709103538592013-08-29T05:25:06.848-05:002013-08-29T05:25:06.848-05:00Well done. Love how you created a link for the gra...Well done. Love how you created a link for the grandfather that never existed. LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-62298472806194636882013-08-28T22:46:40.149-05:002013-08-28T22:46:40.149-05:00This is so sad yet, if by holding onto that lie ma...This is so sad yet, if by holding onto that lie made him feel and look alive, maybe it was as real as anything else we tell another. I enjoyed how descriptive this was. I could picture the person at the counter, and her spotting her grandfather. Wonderful!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-69816919420143050082013-08-28T18:36:35.438-05:002013-08-28T18:36:35.438-05:00This is so sad. This is so sad. Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-38997328318461785172013-08-28T18:25:34.738-05:002013-08-28T18:25:34.738-05:00Invented memories can sometimes be kind. Thanks f...Invented memories can sometimes be kind. Thanks for sharing this with us!Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-62518599125297653382013-08-28T17:37:33.497-05:002013-08-28T17:37:33.497-05:00Terrific opening line, Tina! And I love old men wh...Terrific opening line, Tina! And I love old men who lie.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-9644268803919481052013-08-28T15:42:00.044-05:002013-08-28T15:42:00.044-05:00Oh my, you captured that scene beautifully in all ...Oh my, you captured that scene beautifully in all its wrenching sadness. I love the line - as if something as insubstantial as smoke could make up for a broken heart. And yet at least he's not holed up in his house giving up. Beautiful slice of 'life.' Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117409443842865395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-35071448017764727262013-08-28T13:24:46.932-05:002013-08-28T13:24:46.932-05:00It's so sad, but if it the lie makes him feel ...It's so sad, but if it the lie makes him feel alive, I'd let him have it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com