tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post2105930366201640098..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: In The Light Of DayTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-45667768912303821362014-08-08T09:46:37.581-05:002014-08-08T09:46:37.581-05:00I love how you mixed up such disturbing, physical ...I love how you mixed up such disturbing, physical images with the damage done by a lie.Marcyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18146625702822086807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-88697159711325742942014-08-08T09:18:17.931-05:002014-08-08T09:18:17.931-05:00The title for this is so perfect...in the light of...The title for this is so perfect...in the light of day, it all looks so different. Nice! Beautifully written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-86573635482596852182014-08-07T15:00:14.856-05:002014-08-07T15:00:14.856-05:00I had to get past my initial "ewww" resp...I had to get past my initial "ewww" response to reread and appreciate this. It was worth exploring again. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-32634242007761613832014-08-07T10:12:25.972-05:002014-08-07T10:12:25.972-05:00This is so visceral. Fantastic imagery! I particul...This is so visceral. Fantastic imagery! I particularly love the muddy tire tracks as lies. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-50840501634769976752014-08-05T16:48:06.522-05:002014-08-05T16:48:06.522-05:00"The muddy tire tracks... cunning lies" ..."The muddy tire tracks... cunning lies" That's some strong stuff there. I really liked this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-15139856867587649122014-08-05T15:57:35.288-05:002014-08-05T15:57:35.288-05:00I agree with Nate and Glasgow! Great job!I agree with Nate and Glasgow! Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-79436332337242281652014-08-05T15:35:15.070-05:002014-08-05T15:35:15.070-05:00That simile is powerful! And I love the accusation...That simile is powerful! And I love the accusation in the last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-68709554851439637522014-08-05T15:05:20.362-05:002014-08-05T15:05:20.362-05:00Dark, very very dark. You create a lot of intrigue...Dark, very very dark. You create a lot of intrigue in your final lines around the kiss. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com