tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post1788712154208908963..comments2024-03-22T18:06:02.887-05:00Comments on Not Just Another Mother Blogger!: CollisionTMWHickmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-14090588524400468652012-08-27T08:13:52.414-05:002012-08-27T08:13:52.414-05:00I like the subtle tension running through this and...I like the subtle tension running through this and the final, teasing exchange. angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-6254571190635921792012-08-24T23:42:47.961-05:002012-08-24T23:42:47.961-05:00Now THAT is a collision! Well done and full of sa...Now THAT is a collision! Well done and full of sass.Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03485338098212307793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-65099145006228630482012-08-24T22:54:05.508-05:002012-08-24T22:54:05.508-05:00So naughty in a nice way. Like :)So naughty in a nice way. Like :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-34424895473278655682012-08-24T20:43:38.284-05:002012-08-24T20:43:38.284-05:00Fantastic meet-cute. Sexy, clever.Fantastic meet-cute. Sexy, clever.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-71305238168529339212012-08-24T19:44:19.875-05:002012-08-24T19:44:19.875-05:00Oooooh la la!Oooooh la la!Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01294308714313220666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-72974462528703763252012-08-24T19:07:09.001-05:002012-08-24T19:07:09.001-05:00Good to know! Thank you. I am a little slow someti...Good to know! Thank you. I am a little slow sometimes!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-51145409126775637772012-08-24T19:06:10.167-05:002012-08-24T19:06:10.167-05:00You are right. I looked at that sentence several t...You are right. I looked at that sentence several times, too! I must have been tired last night.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-32759777467915487792012-08-24T19:04:55.668-05:002012-08-24T19:04:55.668-05:00That's what I think, too. And a steak dinner, ...That's what I think, too. And a steak dinner, at that!TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-67019576004566631372012-08-24T19:03:46.752-05:002012-08-24T19:03:46.752-05:00My biggest fan! I love that you like my writing.My biggest fan! I love that you like my writing.TMWHickmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11099277984216556857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-11823519327622435712012-08-24T16:11:44.562-05:002012-08-24T16:11:44.562-05:00Love this, those last lines so perfect!
Minor con...Love this, those last lines so perfect!<br /><br />Minor concrit: The first line reads really awkwardly for me. "huffed out in exhalation" detracts from the impact. If you revisit, try something like "His breathe was knocked from his lungs." Let us feel the actual force behind the collision. <br /><br />Great take on the prompt. Great job!Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-32164955055941837912012-08-24T14:30:43.625-05:002012-08-24T14:30:43.625-05:00I LOVED this!!! Right up my alley and you told it ...I LOVED this!!! Right up my alley and you told it perfectly. He owes her dinner for the feel!Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-49763820580668535862012-08-24T12:40:48.997-05:002012-08-24T12:40:48.997-05:00Trifecta runs from Monday to Thursday with a bonus...Trifecta runs from Monday to Thursday with a bonus weekend prompt Friday to Sunday :)<br /><br />Fun collision. Seems like it worked out in the end for the two peopleCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-33881173984967647192012-08-24T07:47:39.954-05:002012-08-24T07:47:39.954-05:00Aaaaaaah I LOVE this. I was LITERALLY transported ...Aaaaaaah I LOVE this. I was LITERALLY transported into their world in that moment. My.... :) #awesomeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-10679408244712634592012-08-24T07:29:44.509-05:002012-08-24T07:29:44.509-05:00Ohhhh, I love when you write like this.
Ohhhh, I love when you write like this. <br />Lizbethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03449627964374811836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1079589059457212218.post-46378039901701594342012-08-24T06:29:44.515-05:002012-08-24T06:29:44.515-05:00That was good. I've been meaning to check out ...That was good. I've been meaning to check out Trifecta too. Thanks for the reminder. Here's to next week...hope to see you.Kenya G. Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03901164070843042029noreply@blogger.com